Editing NLS Archive 0713

=National Library of Scotland Archive File 0713=
This file contains correspendence betweeen DD and [[Richenda Todd]] mainly relating to the editing of Gemini.  This item was sourced from notes made by [[Jan Fergus]].

==Selected Items==

===21-Dec-1999 DD to Richenda Todd on Blurb etc===
Brief omments applicability of [[Lymond|Lymond's]] return from [[Russia]], and recovery from the [[Scottish Plan]]

===12-Jan-2000 DD to Richenda Todd===
* 298/14: Clarification of confusion over [[Nicholas|NIcholas's]] birth date
* 442: Ages of [[Jacon]], [[Gregorio]] and [[Julius]] and and error in [[Unicorn Hunt]] relating to this.
* 449: Age of [[Bonne]]

===20-Jan-2000 DD to Richenda Todd===
* p. 135:  Location of Nicholas's house

===21-Jan-2000 DD to Richenda Todd===
[[Kathi]] doesn’t know [[Henry]] is N’s son 759 last para, “No, but she would expect Nicholas to think of Henry as his half-brother. OK, I think.”

===22-Jan-2000 DD to Richenda Todd===
* 998:  "Clear as a Snowfield in Sunlight" - is the prose too purple?
* 948/7:  Hiding of the key.
* 570 Why was Julius put with [[Jamie Liddell]]?

===16-Feb-2000 DD to Richenda Todd===
*  Enjoying rereading the book
*  Dunnetworker in Banff

===20-Feb-2000 - DD to Richenda Todd===
*  [[Barrel attack]] in [[Bruges]] was by [[Jaak de Fleury|Jaak de Fleury’s]] men, not [[Jordan St Pol|St Pol's]].

===28-Feb-2000 - DD to Richenda Todd===
* On using brackets in Gemini to indicate the Authorial voice

===04-Apr-2000 - DD to Richenda Todd===
* on Page 1 line 1 — intended to match start of NR. 

===05-Jun-2000 - DD to Richenda Todd===
* Minor mistakes
* Mistakes picked up by Knopf

==References==
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